Comments on: Treasure Hunt http://www.shortstorybook.net/2009/08/02/treasure-hunt/ Tue, 07 Sep 2010 11:36:52 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Rae http://www.shortstorybook.net/2009/08/02/treasure-hunt/comment-page-1/#comment-505 Rae Sun, 08 Nov 2009 03:06:05 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=261#comment-505 I think "Treasure Hunt" was cute. =] Pixie was visiting her grandparents. It reminds me of my childhood. To make the story more interesting though, you can somehow have a reason for the treasure hunt; for example, Pixie lost her necklace or a doll. Then, her grandparents give her a suggestion: a hunt for even a better item that Pixie lost. =] Great writing style as well!!! KEEP WRITING! I think “Treasure Hunt” was cute. =] Pixie was visiting her grandparents. It reminds me of my childhood. To make the story more interesting though, you can somehow have a reason for the treasure hunt; for example, Pixie lost her necklace or a doll. Then, her grandparents give her a suggestion: a hunt for even a better item that Pixie lost.

=] Great writing style as well!!! KEEP WRITING!

]]> By: Short Stories http://www.shortstorybook.net/2009/08/02/treasure-hunt/comment-page-1/#comment-499 Short Stories Thu, 05 Nov 2009 03:15:28 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=261#comment-499 @ Susan - Do you suggest something more, which could have made this story more interesting. @ Susan – Do you suggest something more, which could have made this story more interesting.

]]> By: Susan http://www.shortstorybook.net/2009/08/02/treasure-hunt/comment-page-1/#comment-498 Susan Thu, 05 Nov 2009 00:16:39 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=261#comment-498 This was a boring story. I do not think a child would read it on their own or enjoy it being read. This was a boring story. I do not think a child would read it on their own or enjoy it being read.

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