Comments on: Clatter – A short story http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/ Sat, 03 Dec 2011 22:59:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.4 By: Short Stories http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-1189 Short Stories Tue, 20 Jul 2010 15:16:08 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=839#comment-1189 @ivyclarice - soon we shall be having an online short story writing contest, so do subscribe to the blog, enjoy the short stories, vote for them and let the best one win the contest. @ivyclarice – soon we shall be having an online short story writing contest, so do subscribe to the blog, enjoy the short stories, vote for them and let the best one win the contest.

]]> By: ivyclarice http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-1185 ivyclarice Tue, 20 Jul 2010 01:48:59 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=839#comment-1185 I found this to be a well-written, riveting read. I have a SHORT attention span as a reader, and didn't struggle with it. It's good in a technical sense too; constructed well and avoids adverb pitfalls. I found this to be a well-written, riveting read. I have a SHORT attention span as a reader, and didn’t struggle with it.

It’s good in a technical sense too; constructed well and avoids adverb pitfalls.

]]> By: writer1 http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-1089 writer1 Wed, 16 Jun 2010 07:14:15 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=839#comment-1089 @chedarlyn : depends on how you read it! 'sometimes a frame of mind is all that is required ..to understand something. Maybe re-read it, "I am sure you'll grasp the subtlety." :) @chedarlyn : depends on how you read it! ‘sometimes a frame of mind is all that is required ..to understand something. Maybe re-read it, “I am sure you’ll grasp the subtlety.” :)

]]> By: chedarlyn http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-1088 chedarlyn Wed, 16 Jun 2010 06:54:16 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=839#comment-1088 please? I dont understnd the last paragraph... why? please? I dont understnd the last paragraph… why?

]]> By: Short Stories http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-1084 Short Stories Tue, 15 Jun 2010 10:26:27 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=839#comment-1084 @Komal - We write such good stories, so that fans like you enjoy reading. @Komal – We write such good stories, so that fans like you enjoy reading.

]]> By: Komal http://www.shortstorybook.net/2010/06/15/clatter-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-1083 Komal Tue, 15 Jun 2010 09:48:00 +0000 http://www.shortstorybook.net/?p=839#comment-1083 Ah..heart wrenching story..nicely written Ah..heart wrenching story..nicely written

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