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Bounce – short contest story

3 August 2010 810 views 4 Comments

bounce short story Bounce – short contest story

Writer is 8 years old and youngest participant of this contest. Please encourage the writer.

One day at house of Bounce [the red ball], Blue Ball, Cheese Ball and Red Ball were playing in the garden. Suddenly there was a big noise from a huge red cracker. Red ball and Cheese ball were scared and they hide near the bush. But Blue ball did not come there to hide.

After 32 minutes, Blue ball returned with a scared face.  Cheese Ball said, What was there? I don’t know, but there was someone with a black face and showing gun towards the log so I ran and ran and at last escaped, said the Blue Ball. But we have to find who burst the red cracker and who is this person with black face, said all of the friends.

Blue ball and Cheese ball decided to call the Police Ball. All met and said we have to solve this mystery. After sometime they did a magic and all of them vanished to solve the mystery.

The story will continue and the you will know the secret in Bounce Part 2.

Part 2

Soon blue ball,red ball,cheese ball became visible. They saw a huge mountain and they entered the mountain through the secret passage leading towards South. Suddenly again the red crackers busting noise came. They ran to see where the noise was coming. There was black ball busting red crackers. Red ball shouted,” Who are you and why are you busting that red cracker.” Black ball ran away and he dropped the key by mistake. Cheese ball picked up the key. It was a Key ball an it started speaking – I am Key ball. Blue ball said,”Do you know why Black ball was busting Red crackers, suddenly they felt dizzy and they were getting hypnotized. He has taken over the Skybeam land. We must go and save them. Ok, take me too, they entered the gate and Blue ball and they all set off to save the Skybeam land.

These will continue in Bounce part-3
Part 3
As they set off, they opened the gates. They saw everyone in the Skybean land was working. Suddenly Cheese ball came running with Black ball. Blue ball said,”Do u know this Black ball told them the story. They ran jumping inside the box machine. They kept escaping the cube tutors and reach corridor. They reached the palace of hypnotize and reached the hall and Cheese Ball said, “Now see what I am going to do to hypnotize. The balls jumped on hypnotize and kill him. Everything vanished and the king came running to thank the balls thus the land was safe.
Have u read the contest story The boy written by Tanja Cilia.
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4 Comments »

  • Vijeta Gawdi said:

    This is by far the best story I have liked..In today’s times when time is scarce..this one was a refreshing quickie….All the best to the writer.

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    # 3 August 2010 at 4:01 pm
  • Mamta said:

    Fun to read. Good going Krishang!!

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    # 11 August 2010 at 5:02 pm
  • krutika said:

    hey kishu great… Your story is superb.. we all loved it..keep writing new stories..we will wait for next story …..

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    # 31 August 2010 at 4:19 pm
  • roshni said:

    hey kishu nice story

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    # 31 August 2010 at 6:00 pm

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