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Guest Story – To you…. my love

12 June 2011 10,001 views 8 Comments

father daughter Guest Story   To you.... my loveToday is 3rd of June. Two years back , this day Aru was with Meenal. It was her birthday and just 2 days later was Aru’s birthday. Since last few years they had been celebrating both of their birthdays together on the same day. They had outed the whole day, had a beautiful candlelit homemade dinner.

But today Aru is all alone. He has just returned from the Village hospital. Tired and exhausted he lies on the cot of his small quarter. He tries to dose off, but thoughts keep propping up. They had loved each other so much , rather he still loves her. But he is not destined to be married. He has more important aspirations. and he never blamed Meenal for leaving him. On the contrary he is very happy for her. Ma told him two days back that Meenal is getting married by the end of the year. The boy is an architect by profession settled in Pune. Good for Meenal , she does not have to leave her job.

Meenal and Aru were neighbors. They had grown up together. Although Aru was 3 yrs elder to Meenal, they were friends. They had never proposed each other but they and their families knew about their unfathomable love. Nothing could have gone wrong between the two, and nothing actually did. Meenal, just after completing her engineering got a job in an IT firm at Pune. She was waiting for the day when Aru would finish up his medical studies. Love although unspoken was dreaming big in her eyes. But for Aru, life was moulding a different shape. With the complete of internship in a forgotten village of Bihar, the truth dawned on him , the truth of how badly he is needed in these rurals. The plight of villagers suffering and dying because no doctor would come to a village , brought tears into his eyes. He decided to give up all his riches and luxuries of urban life for these poor souls. He was sure his parents would understand, and yes they did.

But to tell Meenal the news was an agonizing pain. And she cried and shouted and yelled, but nothing could make Aru stay back. He never wanted her to come with him. Why should she sacrifice all for him to get nothing? No , he was happy that she parted ways. Two years have passed since then. Remembering all the nostalgia , Aru doses off.

The next day he wakes up to rural fresh air and chirping of birds. Suddenly last nights’ thoughts make him sad. But then he remembers he the reason for being here, he loves this village, its people their innocence. He loves it when he heals and cures them.This is a transcendental happiness.

After getting ready he reaches the small 2 room hospital.There is a hue and cry. The only nurse of the hospital is carrying tiny bundle in her arm. As Aru approaches the nurse, he is taken aback. It is an infant hardly a week old. Someone had left her on the door of the hospital. The moment Aru takes the baby in his arm, she smiles.Oh the moment is so divine. Aru gives a peck on the forehead and whispers “You are my Meenal”..

About the Author – Sushmita Sahu

Although I am a science student , I love anything which is creative be it writing or sketching or cooking or simply dreaming. During school days I had the hobby of writing poems. That hobby is long lost, but recently (around a year back) I discovered a new love that is blogging. Since then I have been writing short stories and my views on current or any topics.
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  • Anindita said:

    lovely story … keep writing more !

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  • Shruti said:

    I have always been fan of your writing… Looking forward to many more new stories. Keep up the good work!

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  • Chintan said:

    Good One…..

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  • Rajendra said:

    i read carefully,but find not so praiseworthy, Sorry for an unpleasant reading.

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  • balaji appavi said:

    HATS OFF TO U!!! GREAT CREATIVITY….
    UR LINES IN THE END OF THE STORY……
    “YOU R MY MEENAL” MADE ME CRY……………………….
    SUPERBBB!!!

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  • Sudhir said:

    The ending is superb!The smile of a small baby is truely divine.

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  • sunil said:

    being positive good one

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  • Daxesh said:

    Hats Offs,

    Lovely Hearth Touching.

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